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sick a minute

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Fri, 2021-07-23 23:47

I've been sick a minute
sinking deep in it
The never ending stress
Had me depressed.

It's a blessing since 2017
To live my life pain free.

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Editing - rough draft
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scribbler

Sat, 2021-07-24 11:17

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Nice and concise. You might like the shop I'm running. It will involve some Haiku. Check it out and holler if you want in

Barbara Writes

Thu, 2021-07-29 12:54

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I will check out ht shop

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Geezer

Sat, 2021-07-24 12:46

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as though some worry has lifted from your shoulders. I sincerely hope that is so.
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Barbara Writes

Thu, 2021-07-29 12:58

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much worry has lifted wit the MS. Now I awaiting cataract surgery in august to new glasses to help correct the vision in the other eye. I maybe able to read some poems on here without temporary blindness after a couple of readings.

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Geezer

Thu, 2021-07-29 15:01

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to hear that you are having the corrective-surgery. Having problems with your eyes is the pits. I had laser surgery to correct my glaucoma a few months ago. So glad that it wasn't something more serious. Doctor says that eventually, I will have to have the cataract-surgery, but not necessary yet. I have to be careful as I only have one good one and nothing can be done for the left one as it is permanently blind. "Sight is precious, protect it at all costs!"
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Barbara Writes

Thu, 2021-07-29 23:56

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My left can be corrected with glasses but is totally blind in right after laser and a valve put in to to keep pressure down

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Fri, 2021-07-30 12:45

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