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Gibbous Moon Eve Haiku

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Wed, 2021-08-04 21:00

https://youtu.be/4oVdoSz_yvM

Orange ball in the sky
It nearly touches the ground
This late afternoon.

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2021-08-05 06:51

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Don't you just love that word, Gibbous? ~ Geez.
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Barbara Writes

Fri, 2021-08-06 01:05

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Yes I really do and love seeing it also

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