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Right place but maybe not the right time

I've been in a mood lately but right now I'm figuring why not
Basically I know I've got a 50 percent chance of you saying no but how bout

I give it a go Well I'm a poet named Emmanuel and it's really nice to meet you

You should already know your beautiful but just in case you haven't heard it in a while

You are
Hope this ain't a bother but I'd love to get a chance to talk to you sometime

I apologize for being so shy

Hi and you are Who?

Editing stage: 



This is like a give it some shape to make it feel like a conversation with a bit more 'punch'

Focus on your key words and then maybe adopt the freeform style. Have a look at my new poems to give you the idea?

Eg., "I've been a mood lately
but right now
I'm figuring out
why not"...

etc. etc.,....give it a go....would like to see how it shapes up.


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