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BettyBuff
Member since October 31, 2012
Member for 13 years, 7 months
My Mote Of Dust
One can look at a cooling cinder
in awe
of it's once brilliance
The way I now look at your kinder
face
in my remembrance
The one corner of my Universe
I know for sure
the Laws of Nature
conspired
to transcend
the physical bounds of my life
I know my value
you showed me
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that in our cosmic neighbourhood
I was unique
Our mote of dust
is the only place
where love exists
BettyBuff’s timeline
- October 2022
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31 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2018
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20 SatReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @Chiori
"nice poem carefully constructed, I like your use of words" -
19 FriReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @Eumolpus
"I especially like the last line. I was not sure of this stanza "the Laws of Nature conspired to transcend the physical bounds of my life" As an abstract reader, i do not have a reference for what that means. Losing a fa…" -
18 ThuReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @weirdelf
"Whatever, it doesn't matter, this is a lovely, profound piece of work. Thank you for sharing it." -
16 Tue
- October 2017
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31 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2017
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18 Thu
- April 2017
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22 Sat
- October 2013
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31 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2013
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15 TueHighest posting month
January 2013 — 12 poems
- November 2012
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11 Sun
- October 2012
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31 WedFirst critique offered
on "Samhain" (since unpublished) by @Dalton
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31 WedFirst publication
HANDMAIDEN
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31 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Married, Complex, Argumentative/Timid depending on whom I'm speaking to. Acid wit, honed by sarcasm. Could be intellectual if I wasn't so lazy. I am rich because i'm not lazy....see the theme developing here? Could be a good writer, If I wasn't...(you finish it off!)...who remembers the original line?
Location: Sheffield, ENGLAND
I don't respond to bullying
especially intellectual bullying.
Recent Work
My Mote Of Dust
Citadel Of Ruin
The Hexagon Of Unexpectedness
Too Fat To Be Edgy
Untethered
Moonlight Gossamer
Cowley's Maxim
Pageantry Of Vanity
Dewey No. 007
Contest Wins
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Workshops
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| GREAT POETRY (a workshop) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2013-01-19 | Concluded |