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Return To The Sea

Silent. all is silent
my thoughts wander
the whisper of the fan
it's balmy breeze reminds me of days
sitting on a beach listening to the crashing waves
on a cool summers night
the shorebirds that scurry playing chicken with the waves
listening to the pounding surf
the seagulls calling
I was born of the sea
it is my home
some will return to the earth
I will return to the sea
the place where I was born

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I'm at my best and at peace when by the ocean were all born in water wee we not I do not believe I ever left after all my sign is Pieces which is a water sign
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thank you

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straight from the beach. I think you have captured the scene perfectly. ~ Gee.
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thank you Jerry

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