Hello, Alex,
Interesting and intriguing poem, dark and sly. Wonderful title which enhances the theme. The Queen certainly has her willing victim under her spell. Love can hurt. I wonder about the word "drill" - maybe "pierce" or something similar? It seems the wound entry would be smooth and slow, very calculated. Love the Palace Gold and Garden Shed reference.
Thank you!
L

Title, language, theme, rhythm, rhyme, logic seems ok. Definitely a clear beginning and end. One could hardly hope for a more organized and flowing poem.
On a personal note I’ve been in relationships that felt like this and they weren’t the healthiest, as you might imagine.

Nice work
Tim

I would write the line: "As he lies helpless, in your mesh."
and "I weaken as my blood does pour."
Otherwise, a very well written piece. I love the dark feeling of it! ~ Geezer.
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What a lovely catchy title! The thoughts hit all the right notes, it is readily understood by all
and fits all the criteria for one of those AWESOME poems.
Here, I see a gem, that was cut and polished by hand and really
means something by virtue of the simplicity and honesty of it.
Well done!
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i love dark poems. i wrote one called the spider's queen but not like this. in mine i am the queen the decider of life and death for the spiders i allow in one corner of the living room lol. love the poem but since you are using slant rhyme i would drop the inversion and not use it -change those lines maybe yyou can still find a slant rhyme to use at the end of the lines rather than using inversion to get it