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Mistakes...
An eerie shiver,
A spinning head,
Lips quiver,
Confusion ahead,
mistakes,
Ruin a day,
Derail a week,
stuipidity,
Dreary feeling,
Watering eye,
Anxious thinking,
I tried...
I FUCKED UP!!
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Comments
IRiz
Sat, 2018-03-03 22:28
Nice one.
Nice one.
Makes me want to make a mistake or two.
IRiz
raj
Sun, 2018-03-04 06:43
Dear Hopeless Writer through
Dear Hopeless Writer through this poem you have given hope to those who make a mistake or two...no one is perfect...
................
raj (sublime_ocean)
weirdelf
Mon, 2018-04-16 12:11
I fuck up on a regular basis
and despise wimps who say 'I made poor choices'.
A strong poem. I like it.
cheers,
Jess
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hopeless_writer
Fri, 2018-04-20 15:19
thanks
for the insight ill check out those workshop
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