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Mama

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Once,
so long ago now, it seems;
Every thing touched
& everywhere
that I turned,
her scent permeated
both air & skin.

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Childhood smells are almost always garlanded by the personal scent of one's primary care giver.
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Able to bring up nausea or pleasant dreams and images from just a smell

A rather clinical approach, but valid nonetheless. Thank you for sharing your kind estimation. Have a pleasant week. Cheers.

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