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Mama
.
Once,
so long ago now, it seems;
Every thing touched
& everywhere
that I turned,
her scent permeated
both air & skin.
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Last few words:
Childhood smells are almost always garlanded by the personal scent of one's primary care giver.
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Comments
Frenchf
Sun, 2013-02-10 13:02
Yes the brain is a potent force
Able to bring up nausea or pleasant dreams and images from just a smell
crypticbard
Sun, 2013-02-10 21:37
quite so!
A rather clinical approach, but valid nonetheless. Thank you for sharing your kind estimation. Have a pleasant week. Cheers.
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