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renewed at daybreak

Once prismatic brilliance;
brilliant only through borrowed light.

Alone again in darkness, gleaming;
glum, instant companion of a night -

blind to grief and deaf to joy,
save by pristine thought on lone-ward height.

Ever calling, feline caterwauling;
In the distance horizon burning bright.

That sparkle in the eye is rekindled; 
Fully renewed at the break of day.

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Once prismatic brilliance;
brilliant only through borrowed light.

Alone again in darkness, gleaming;
glum, instant companion of night -

blind to grief and deaf to joy,
save by song on lone-ward height.

Ever calling, feline caterwauling;
In distant horizon, burning bright.

That sparkle in the eye is rekindled; Fully renewed, at dawn made right.

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

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intuition stirs..
like these awareness poems
night..day..
the landscapes in between

good wording
soothing poem

Thank You!

Glad the soothing quality came across the expanse. You are much appreciated.

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

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