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Lovers Spat

Submitted by greeneyes on Thu, 2011-01-27 22:22

Here comes the thunder
Zeus is angry with his bride
Hera is crying

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This is an old one i changed a little
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Not actively editing

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greeneyes

Sun, 2011-01-30 18:30

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I love Greek mythology. As far as your book goes, i have it and love it!

Much Love,
Elizabeth

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scribbler

Sun, 2011-01-30 19:33

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just enough mention of nature to be a Haiku with enough other to be of interest. My comment is longer than your poem lol..............scribbler

loved

Sun, 2011-01-30 20:24

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I wrote a song for you
some two months ago
where did you go,
none read it
so today from the blog ,
you know
i resurfaced it for you
now please read it
kindly do so

loved

Candlewitch

Mon, 2011-02-07 13:58

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What can I say? It is a clever little poem. I, too, love mythology! I hope you are doing well. It has been what feels like a very long, cold, winter.

love, Cat

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Roscoe Lane

Mon, 2011-02-07 15:44

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I like it, and i hope those emerald eyes are still shining. Love Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

faerybeki

Mon, 2011-02-07 16:34

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I like it too, clever little haiku, much love Beki xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

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