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lost in the ripples

Mirrored mountains gleam
Ripples erase reflections
Water moves away

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with the most profound quality required of haiku
"Water moves away"
Brilliant!

cheers,
Jess
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I appreciate it I've been writing lots of haiku I am exploring the boundaries

Cheers Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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Painted really well
lovely!!

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Very glad you like it

Regards Jc x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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I really appreciate your comment ... I finished another today will post it later tonight

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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Perfect image, placid, I can see, hear, smell, and feel it. Wonderful work!

Ron

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

Thank you so much I've been working hard on the series there are many more just not ready for posting
Thanks for the great comment makes it all worthwhile

Regards Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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A good Haiku now here is one for you:-

Serendipity (happy accident (;-)
when all our poets dreams come true
They should write it down

Have a lovely day hey, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

And the answer to your haiku will be my next post in half an hour lol

Glad you liked it

Love always Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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Dang! Now you've got Me thinking about Haiku and I never can write just one lol. I liked the way you pointed out the delicacy of reflections on water..............stan

Really glad you enjoyed my little haiku ... I've been bothered by the Muse of late lol
Look forward to reading a haiku from you !!

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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remember my "Haikookas"?
You can write haikus in a series, but the condition is each one must be able to stand alone.

cheers,
Jess
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gorgeous

Thanks Sue glad you liked it

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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