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I Believed In Something Too Quickly(random Challenge @1)

I believed In Something Too Quickly
Never but never believe in love to quickly
the let down hurts
in the words of Cat Stevens "love hurts,love, scars,love wounds and mars"
I'm sure it does
so why do I keep believing in love?
Well there is always a tomorrow
to look to
always hope
that the one special person
will come along

I still believe
I still have hope
my journey is not at end
call me a fool if you will
then a fool I will be

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Pauls challenge I like this idea
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love shows up in the most unexpected places, sometimes it sneaks up on you and before you know it; there it is, hugging you in a headlock! I have no doubt that it is sneaking up on lots of people right now! And you could be the next one! Great work and heartfelt truth! Nice job. Make sure you put it in the drop down so that you can collect your certificate if you want one for completing the challenge. ~ Geez.
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thank you ver much for your to kind comments btw what drop down

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thank you so muchI appreciate you reading and offering your input

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Your first line needs another O in Too! ~ Geez.
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Hi, Chrys,
"...call me a fool if you will, then a fool I will be." Hopeful. There's really no other way regarding love, is there? Very nice, indeedy!
Thank you!
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Thank you . No I guess there isn't

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