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Christmas Day

I miss you everyday
but today I miss you more

I make memories without you
theres a hole in the fabric of my mind

this holiday you loved so much
I celebrate in your name, secretly

I miss you more each year
and until we meet again

smiling tears will ever fall

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I hope everyone has a Safe and Merry Christmas ... in Memory of my Mother
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It seems as years pass like starling that we gain ever more friends and family with whom we can celebrate the seasons only in memory.
May you and yours have a wonderful Christmas........................stan

They will be there gathering around you and you know that.
Don't forget they feel your tears, as they do your happines.
So stay happy and know that they are with you always.
Also know that there are many that think of you throughout the year and in thinking of you stand at your side,
Yours as always Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Liked this cute piece. Sad though
I really liked that last line especially "smilling tears" so original for me at least :)
best wishes

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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