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Polemic Senryu

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but you started it
yes of course I did my friend
I always do.

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Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Yep, that's you Jess. roflmao

It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

you did not! I did!
no solipsistic bull's eye,
you missed my target!

~A

p.s. ;-)

Oh my dearest friend..........
If you are talking about yourself then I will say(YES YOU DO)LOL

but you started it
yes of course I did my friend
I always do.
________________,.,.,.,.

Mona Rose

It's your fault
That I started it
You invite ridicule... I know, definitely not to form. But I felt the sentiment to be more important

~ Gee

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Jess
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"Sometimes, it's just easier to agree, than to argue about it, eh???" Loved it:)

I forgot my old signature so this one will have to do for a while!

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