Mike

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destiny

Posted Jun 30, 2010 · 20 lines · 2 critiques

Would you for once just give me a little break
I am well aware that this is just another mistake
Today I saw you again and tomorrow I will awake
Could you spare me another morning for goodness sake

I had already found a way to let you go
Finally stopped time from moving way too slow
Yet no idea about what I truthfully know
All faded when you sincerely said hello

Looking absolutely stunning in your dress
Turning my emotions into a misleading mess
Another page wasted, your beauty I can't express
Just know that I really needed you to say yes

After all there ain't no real solution
We learned a lot through our evolution

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Don't wanna move on to another revolution
Feels like I give in to my retribution

Without you I don't just feel alone
What scares me is that I become unknown
Since you left me a lot I have grown
But I feel like I fight here on my own

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First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
30 Wed

Received a critique
on destiny from @magics02
"I have not read you in a bit and I am glad to stumble upon you once again here. I like this story/like poem. I do think if you broke it down some perhaps a little example of this would be as such I worked a little for y…"
30 Wed

Received a critique
on destiny from @Alice Ember
"It looks fine to me. godd job on this one Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to"
30 Wed

Posted a poem
destiny
"Would you for once just give me a little break"
Open thread 20 lines
30 Wed

Received a critique
on Cor.... from @Alice Ember
"Haha, it seems we're both in love pain at the moment though i'm fairly sure yours is worse 'cause i spend the whole time trying to fend of the love he was trying to force feed me. I guess he got sick of it and left, tha…"
26 Sat

Received a critique
on Time from @yenti
"This is a lovely piece, maybe not notice because you forgot to be angry which isn't a bad thing but it needed some grit in there to irritate the reader, look forward to tomorrow when your next piece will be, Yours Ian.T"
25 Fri

Received a critique
on Something has to be declared from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. This poem has a different flavor that what I have read lately, therefore I find it unique. With these lines: Now that you know that I have always cared I’m telling you that something has to be declared…"
22 Tue

Posted a poem
Cor....
"It seems there is no way to get you out of my head"
Open thread 22 lines
06 Sun

Received a critique
on In the Reins from @Arrow
"Pattern: This is a blue, if not embittered, ("I come to understand you’re like all the rest") poem so the rhyme in every line doesn't strike me as the best form. I tend to assoicate that with light verse. However, you'v…"
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Time
"For more than weeks you're ignoring me"
Open thread 20 lines
02 Wed

Received a critique
on Untitled from @Breakinglogic
"Hey there :) just stopped by and read your write here, I much enjoyed it. best stanza I think: " Here I am deliberately runnin’ the extra mile The world would stop just ‘cause you smile Your name brings a hundred things…"
May 2010
31 Mon

Posted a poem
Untitled
"I would give everything and more not to look at you"
Open thread 23 lines
30 Sun

Posted a poem
Something has to be declared
"You know what happened to what you once declared"
Open thread 33 lines
28 Fri

Posted a poem
In the Reins
"This night almost nothing remains"
Open thread 29 lines
27 Thu

Received a critique
on m.f.e.o. from @Alice Ember
"I don't know whatto say. There is such raw pain in here and i'm fairly sure from your other poems recently that this has happened to you. I am very sorry. But, I love the poem it's like you just let the words of hate ex…"
27 Thu

Posted a poem
m.f.e.o.
"Trust me we are done this time"
Open thread 35 lines
26 Wed

Posted a poem
People Like Me
"This time don't make it sound this sad"
Open thread 27 lines
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Letting Go
"Why do I have to go through all this"
Open thread 19 lines
19 Wed

Posted a poem
the same old thing
"Faith faded some place far"
Open thread 28 lines
18 Tue

Posted a poem
Finishing The Unfinished
"Can't it already all be over"
Open thread 51 lines
15 Sat

Highest posting month
May 2010 — 9 poems
08 Sat

Critiqued
"Mind games" by @Alice Ember
"this is very well written...hope to read more from you in the near future.... sincerely michael"
02 Sun

Critiqued
"Shit Eating Grin" by @hippiepoet69
"enjoyed reading this, can relate to the theme.... keep up the great writing sincerely michael"
02 Sun

Posted a poem
Taken Away
"You take away needed stability"
Open thread 24 lines
April 2010
22 Thu

Critiqued
"At least once" by @DawningDaytripper
"this is amazing... i feel like I can connect to it a lot... very well written indeed sincerely Michael"
03 Sat

Critiqued
"AFTER YOU" by @Bonitaj
"awesome, terrific, I could go on, but yu get it by now, you seriously touched me with your words, looking forward to read more of in the near future... thank you kind regards, michael 'Perception Requires Duality'"
March 2010
27 Sat

Critiqued
"WHITE COLLARED" by @ziggy
"oh and yeah 5 stars of course"
27 Sat

Critiqued
"WHITE COLLARED" by @ziggy
"this is really an exceptional piece of art you truly touch me with your words i loved the flow of it, in addition to that i can really relate to the context, like roscoe mentioned before,'...you have put it down brillia…"
27 Sat

Critiqued
"Understanding" by @Starry_Nights
"like the flow of this one a lot plus i can relate to the context nicely done kind regards michael"
September 2009
03 Thu

Critiqued
"CURTAIN FALLS" by @Bonitaj
"dear boni (i hope it's alright that I call you Boni) well, first thigs first, i really enjoyed readin' this poem i espiecially like the last two lines, since i feel like i can really connect to 'em.... and how about tha…"
March 2009
25 Wed

First critique offered
on "A TRIBUTE TO A VERY SPECIAL MOTHER ." by @IRENE
14 Sat

First publication
Whispering Emptiness

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on destiny from @magics02

on destiny from @Alice Ember

on Cor.... from @Alice Ember

on Time from @yenti

on Something has to be declared from @Candlewitch

on In the Reins from @Arrow

on Untitled from @Breakinglogic

on m.f.e.o. from @Alice Ember

May 2010 — 9 poems

"Mind games" by @Alice Ember

"Shit Eating Grin" by @hippiepoet69

"At least once" by @DawningDaytripper

"AFTER YOU" by @Bonitaj

"WHITE COLLARED" by @ziggy

"WHITE COLLARED" by @ziggy

"Understanding" by @Starry_Nights

"CURTAIN FALLS" by @Bonitaj

on "A TRIBUTE TO A VERY SPECIAL MOTHER ." by @IRENE

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