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Shit Eating Grin

 I hang up the phone with a shit eating grinI give out a little moanthinking back about when I lay the phone by my headembrace my pillow tighttalked till her phone went deadI tell my baby good night my hands on her hipsI gaze into her eyesI taste of her sweet lipsmet with her soft cries I touch the small of her backshe lets out a little sighI smile as I fondle her rackall I hear is her cry oh! yes! I've waited so longto give myself to youeven though it was wrongI knew your heart was true I take her breath awaywith the touch of my tonguedon't worry about yesterdayback when we were young I drop her bra to the floorand step back for my eyes to feaston the body I so adoreshe's the beauty and I'm the beast my hands explore my deepest desireour lips can't get enoughhearts and souls set our bodies on firestand back, this could get rough yes, yeah that's it, that's the spotwhat have I been missingdam your making me so hotall your loving and kissi RING RING DAM! I look at the caller IDI answer with a shit eating grinHi! darling, it's meI got the phone charged again PANT! PANT!Darling, you OK copyright  5-2-10   huey horton   (hippiepoet69)  
— hippiepoet69, May 02, 2010

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Mike

16 years 1 month ago

enjoyed reading this, can

enjoyed reading this, can relate to the theme.... keep up the great writing sincerely michael
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Michael

I called her up after 27 years last week. The first night we talked, she feel asleep on me two times. Night before last both of our phones went dead. She asked me if I had a grin on my face too. HeHe I'm going to get offline in case she calls me. Take Care. huey
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Indi

I just hope she has the same grin when we hang up. She says she does. Take Care and Thanks again. huey
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

She is

She has inspired me for 30 years. She has too much power over my heart and she knows it. The only tear I ever seen from her was when I said good-bye. I hope now all we inspire in each other are happy tears. Thanks Julie
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

nice!

porn poetry very exciting! shirley harrison
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

What can I say

She inspires me. truth is I'm getting to old to have many of those dreams. I have dry dreams and wet farts. Oh! the joys of getting old. Thanks Shirley. The one I wrote last night is not porn. Too badl Take Care. huey
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Oh you HOT Devil

You're never too old, so they say? So why do I feel so old? Nice one. I'm glad you're happy being with her again. Rosina xena465
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

A hot babe does that to me

that holds my heart. She will always be frozen in my heart. As a twenty three year beautiful vibrent Lady. At the fair or water park, She was like a little kid. Thanks. Take Care. huey