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Mar 27, 2010
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Understanding
Your eyes sparkleTears flow in a trickleI try to make you laugh with a tickleBut you're eyes are as dark as charcoal. I ask what's wrongBut you just turn your headAnd my heart fills with DreadBecause for you alone i long. I give you a hugBut you just pull and tug.Finally I get the hintWith me, you're spent.
— Starry_Nights, Mar 27, 2010
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Mike
16 years 2 months ago
like the flow of this one a
Starry_Nights
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you