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Mike
Member since January 1, 2011
Member for 15 years, 5 months
destiny
Would you for once just give me a little break
I am well aware that this is just another mistake
Today I saw you again and tomorrow I will awake
Could you spare me another morning for goodness sake
I had already found a way to let you go
Finally stopped time from moving way too slow
Yet no idea about what I truthfully know
All faded when you sincerely said hello
Looking absolutely stunning in your dress
Turning my emotions into a misleading mess
Another page wasted, your beauty I can't express
Just know that I really needed you to say yes
After all there ain't no real solution
We learned a lot through our evolution
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Don't wanna move on to another revolution
Feels like I give in to my retribution
Without you I don't just feel alone
What scares me is that I become unknown
Since you left me a lot I have grown
But I feel like I fight here on my own
Mike’s timeline
- January 2026
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01 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- January 2021
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01 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2016
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01 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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01 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2011
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01 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- June 2010
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30 Wed
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30 WedReceived a critique
on destiny from @Alice Ember
"It looks fine to me. godd job on this one Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to" -
30 Wed
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30 WedReceived a critique
on Cor.... from @Alice Ember
"Haha, it seems we're both in love pain at the moment though i'm fairly sure yours is worse 'cause i spend the whole time trying to fend of the love he was trying to force feed me. I guess he got sick of it and left, tha…" -
22 Tue
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04 Fri
- May 2010
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15 SatHighest posting month
May 2010 — 9 poems
- March 2009
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25 WedFirst critique offered
on "A TRIBUTE TO A VERY SPECIAL MOTHER ." by @IRENE
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14 SatFirst publication
Whispering Emptiness
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destiny
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Something has to be declared
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Letting Go
the same old thing
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