Mind games

I've been tormented. Not with dreams, but life. But yet, I keep going. Take Care and keep writting. Take Care. huey

this is very well written...hope to read more from you in the near future.... sincerely michael

I hear your pain of the nightmares and know I was thinking of you today and leaving this for you tonight. with love of course... To Alice Tis no fault of your's, the hearts pain remains No one knows why things happen the way they do they just do for every season there is a reason shall we question everything our minds numb from pain heart aches day to day will it ever pass it will, but the memories of love and laughter will carry you through all those aching moments when you can not seem to breathe and your body is drained of care Loss of one so dear to your heart keep him close, he shall never depart from you, lovely young Alice You, have gone through so much in your beautiful young life too soon.. We never know the answers to pain of loss but know that others care and share the pain too. Thinking of you girl and I know today was hard on you but you got through it and you will. Time heals but memories forever stay in the heart. Love, Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived

I did not want you to cry but if you are then that is okay too honey. You have been through alot you and the family and you share with me and that is why I wanted to share with you my thoughts in words to you. You can always call on me and I will be there for you..Next time I go to New York I can visit with you and Annie..wow I wish I could go there Memorial Weekend coming up. Joey has never been there only when my grandmother and grandfather passed and then he was only a little toddler. Yes know alot do care here and I love ya gal!! Mona xoxoxo Magics02 TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Your too cute gal and I know what you mean, someday maybe, my friend is going up to Queens next week and I told her to hide me in her suitcase, I think next year for Joey's grad I will surprise him with the tickets. But then again he wants to see snow,,, oh my I don't think my old bones can take that cold stuff. LOL Sleep well Alice, until then.. Mona luvs ya!! xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

It is funny you said that because my Godfather lives there!! I would love to go see my great Uncle there and yes he tells me how cold it is up in there. SOmeday I will go..soon I hope would love to go to groundzero for sure....:( Got to get some rest and talk to you tomorrow keep up on your writing and learn all you can here and then some more. good nite ALice xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Your poem is very moving, quite an experience. May I suggest you take the part about the car accident and create a metaphor or maybe try and show it more in other words (like the rest of the poem) rather than flat out tell it :) thanks for sharing, Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

scary, but captivating.