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Beat The Clock
I am getting tired trying to beat the clock
I know soon that it is going to stop
As I get older, it feels like it is going fast
I know that my time it will not last
I look back, and I do not like what I see
All of the things that have made up me
The tragedies, flaws, and falls in my past
Scars are here now and will always last
The trinities of past, future, and now
They concave my reflections somehow
Time is a murderer; it is killing me
It is turning my mind agnostically
Trip over the minutes as the seconds fall
I know it is time for me to go; that is all
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Depressed 1
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:30
Thanks
Thanks Kat. Fortunately, I have found several outlets for my depression.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:46
dear D1
is all that beautifully amazing art work yours??? i'm going back for another look...I once had a 1951 International Harvester fully restored! (Green)
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Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-12 06:13
dear Depressed1
hang in there, baby! you are a gem. we don't want to lose you!
*hugs, Cat
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Depressed 1
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:30
Thanks
Thanks Cat.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:48
See Note Above! *hugs, Cat
See Note Above!
*hugs, Cat
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Depressed 1
Tue, 2023-02-14 05:21
Thanks
Thanks Cat
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-02-12 18:34
Hang in there
You’re a calculated and concise writer. Your style is well developed and you’re delivering on a regular basis.
Keep it up,
Tim
Depressed 1
Tue, 2023-02-14 05:22
Thanks
Thank you Tim. I like to think I can improve more every write.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
RoseBlack
Sun, 2023-02-12 21:29
Hold on
You are an incredibly strong writer with powerful and emotional pieces. I am glad you are still with us sharing.
~RoseBlack~
Depressed 1
Tue, 2023-02-14 05:22
Thanks
Thanks RoseBlack. It gets difficult but I hang in.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/