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YungPrinzeT
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The Wailing Red Sea
_*@YungPrinzeT*_
24/08/2017
6.30AM
THE WAILING RED SEA
In this azure was an eclipse,
Where the stars despoil
The virgin moon
Of her sheen smile
& collectively laid with her
In the bed of nature.
The neat sheet on the bed
Was stained with reddish drops
Of agony, which in anger
Flowed down
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To hide the defiled moon's pains
Beneath the earth.
The clout
Of the moon's pains
Was soon felt on the earth,
As the pains grew gigantic green
And sharp pointed thorns,
Which choked the earth's innocence.
The moon in a weary mood,
Wore a torn black cloak to mourn
Her murdered pride; her virginty.
Whereas, the stars
Threw a pricey party
To celebrate their callous acts.
But the wails of the red sea
Buried beneath the earth,
Accompanied by lighting
And thunder strike, overwhelmed
The stars' party; deafened & darkened
Their ears & brightness respectively.
Forever shall they fidget in regret Before the now-vindicated moon.
Written by;
Poroye Ezekiel Tobiloba (POET)
CEO, Palace of Exclusive Thoughts
[email protected]
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- September 2017
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24 SunReceived a critique
on The Wailing Red Sea from @Ja Ja
"Much have I, not understood. But the mythical, I deem quite good. I have but a simple education. Not comfortable at adjudication. Thank you for sharing" -
23 SatReceived a critique
on The Wailing Red Sea from @weirdelf
"It is either based in a mythology I am unfamiliar with or is an allegory that doesn't quite carry. You need to be more versatile and experimental in your language use. The word Pain is used three times, moon five times…" -
22 FriReceived a critique
on The Wailing Red Sea from @Chiori
"To me i think it's something about nature, moon eclipse in particular. keep writing" -
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- July 2017
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17 MonFirst critique offered
on "INTIMATE" by @scribbler
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17 MonFirst publication
Suddenly
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17 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 SatHighest posting month
July 2017 — 7 poems
About Me
About me
Pen Name: Poroye Ezekiel Tobiloba (POET)
Facebook ID: YoungPrince Ezekiel Tobiloba
Twitter; @YungPrinzeT
Location: Ogun, Nigeria
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| Collaborative Poetry for Beginners Renga 17 FEAR | (syllabus) | Wading Pool | Started 2017-07-20 | Concluded |