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Sometimes there
Messing up my hair
But I don't care
Places you've been
Things you've seen
You sure are pleasing
On hot summer days
Loose leaves dancing
Follow me along my way
Some people curse you
But I think you're o.k.

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What a delightful little poem this is. It is light and airy(pardon the pun)


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Thanks Lynn. I have had it for about 30 years but never done anything with it.

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