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WHAT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME

I -
Insouciant
ingracious
indifferently
benign

You -
courageous,
flagrantly outspoken -
have opened
my mind

Nestling joy
suckles at this breast
Awakened longing
from what was
an insensate mess

A ratchet to my desires
has been wrenched at the wheel
I am alive again
I breath
I feel

7-01-13

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Comments

Exquisite ... I can't see anything I would change

Nice work Boni

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Great to hear back from you!
Stay well.

Bonitaj

author comment

left unread
the dictionary one would have to refer
that's why
I compose simple in words
a kid can't dispose

loved

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