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in for repairs

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 


in for repairs? I thought it to be a great title ... ain't we all in need for
some repairs.

You will have lots more comments after your repairs are completed.
What does a broken poet look like, better not say lol,
Will send you a thought checker it repairs broken thoughts, by getting rid of distractions.. I just go sit in my Cave lol,
Have a lovely mend,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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