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TIN TIN DEO ....I UNDERSTAND YOU

TIN TIN DEO....I UNDERSTAND YOU
her tongue rattles a smoky gauze
wet lipped licks a velvet pussy
holding her slavering heart

tin tin deo

while she finger painted her inside
thighs honey glazed red
hot as a fever
her mouth pours out of itself
a flagellating tongue fluent
cum blizzard

tin tin deo

dumb founded happy cross-eyed
her head like a carved moon
swaying asylums of shrieking beds
curved slick as a honeymoon dick

tin tin deo

a storm of purple
gayle of violets
from her warm kiln belly
zodiac ancient prostitute
ravishing flame
ruler of ever dreams

tin tin deo

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a riot of thought! only thing that I would change is the second [storm]. I think that you could use any number of words to describe the image. [gale, shower, deluge, etc... ~ Geezer.
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I used the word storm twice it reinforce cadence, but I think your crit nailed it
Much appreciated eagle ears & eyes ;) Thanks Geez

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