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Time out...

Submitted by Geezer on Wed, 2020-10-28 11:29

Sometimes you need a little time
between the stories and the rhyme

To face what life has given you
To do the things you need to do

So my friends do not worry
I'll be back, but un-hurried

Just a little bit, you see
A little bit of time for me

I have things that need be done
And 'til then, keep having fun

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Last few words: 
A couple of more days.
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Wed, 2020-10-28 15:36

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Take good care.
All the best to you and yours,
L

Thalassa Brytaye

Wed, 2020-10-28 15:54

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A delightfully clever rhyme which I may or may not quote someday as a 'have to go, but see you soon' to some of poet friends.
Take care!
~

"To reveal art and conceal the artist is art's true aim." Oscar Wilde

Geezer

Thu, 2020-10-29 10:22

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Hard to stay away from this place, but I'll manage. maybe I'll be at chat today. We'll see. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

Thu, 2020-10-29 15:20

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I am going to just take three or four days. Nothing extended. I just didn't want everyone worried that something had happened to me. I guess maybe I should have just took the time off and not said anything, you all probably wouldn' t missed me and said; "Oh, you were gone?" Lol
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2020-10-29 22:45

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and i have closely observed nobody misses anybody
we all are somebody
when we chair
and when we have no place
we all are just anybody
and
when we have finally gone
we all are addressed
very politely
lest we still hear
where is the body
lol

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