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Thank You

To all the people I've come to love

Heroes who keep me going all these years

Angels who shower me with hope and love

No words could express my gratitude, that's true

Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you

 

You make me feel so blessed in this life

Only because I have you here, by my side

Until the day this life ends, my love for you never ends.......

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A beaut of a write, The challenge is in the title where you use the whole alphabet to start each line, but this one is great and a very well thought out write, take care, Yours Ian.T

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Alid

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Try to replace one of the two you (s) by the end of S1 and see if you like it more.
A lovely read.

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I've edited it but I wonder what if I just end that verse with just gratitude instead of "that's true".

Alid

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I see you are going places and discovering new ways to express yourself, like you have done in this Acrostic. I suggest you use "Advanced Formatting" feature which is in the drop down menu below "simple formatting" and make all first alphabets in each line "Bold". Well done Alid...you have tempted me to try out an acrostic some day...

Regards,.

raj (sublime_ocean)

That's all.

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how do you do that? I've changed it to advance format but still at a lost...

 

Alid

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Before I could, Rula has already explained to you how to do it...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

for some reasons it doesn't work.:( I'll ask if my friends here might know how to do it.

Alid

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To all the people I've come to love

Heroes who keep me going all these years

Angels who shower me with hope and love

No words could express my gratitude, that's true

Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you You make me feel so blessed in this

See I could do it as in above using Advance Formatting option which you already know. Let me try to explain step by step how I converted the T into bold T

1, Keep the cursor before T

2. Press Shift key and click on the other side of T, which will put the T in a black square

3. Now release the Shift Key and Press Ctrl key + B which will convert T to T

Try it now with one alphabet and once you are able to do it, do the same with other alphabets you want to make bold. Hope this helps

raj (sublime_ocean)

make all first alphabets in each line "Bold".

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Select the text you need to make in bold or italics
then use ctl+b ...for bold
Use ctl+I ...for italics
Use ctl+u to underline

hope this helps a little.

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Thank you guys.

Alid

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Just after I gave you step by step guide I notice you had already done it. Great.

raj (sublime_ocean)

;O)

Alid

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someone once said let your readers tell it is acrostic rather than you telling them it is.
I prefer it the way you did it.
Thank you

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I tend to agree with what Rula has suggested. You can do that by deleting from the title "Acrostic Poem"

regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

done the deed.

Alid

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