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SunKu 7 workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Mon, 2018-02-19 17:17

Meters
break my bones

like sticks and stones

Foreign

to my soul

I’m dyslexic

SunKu

poetic style

I will master

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Workshop: 
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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IRiz

Tue, 2018-02-20 09:45

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I thank you for your poetic words of accepting the style.

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Barbara Writes

Tue, 2018-02-20 12:02

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I’m accepting of all styles. Some I catch quickly some I don’t like limericks

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raj

Tue, 2018-02-20 13:28

Your fighting spirit against odds has always been so very inspiring ..

be well...

regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Barbara Writes

Tue, 2018-02-20 16:17

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I appreciate that. I’ve learn a lot from you

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