The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Snowstorm" presents a vivid depiction of a winter scene and the human response to it. The use of direct, simple language contributes to the clarity of the imagery. However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme to enhance its musicality.

The first two lines establish a clear AB rhyme scheme, but this is not maintained throughout the poem. Consistency in rhyme can provide a pleasing structure and rhythm to the poem, making it more engaging for the reader.

The poem also seems to lack a consistent meter, which can disrupt the flow of the reading. Consider revising the lines to establish a more consistent rhythm. For example, the line "Overtime will be allowed" disrupts the rhythm established in the previous lines due to its length. Shortening or restructuring this line could improve the overall rhythm of the poem.

The use of imagery is effective in creating a vivid picture of the snowstorm and the human response to it. However, the poem could benefit from the use of more figurative language, such as metaphors or similes, to add depth and complexity to the imagery.

The narrative of the poem is clear, but the theme or message could be developed further. The line "Repeat those old mistakes" suggests a deeper meaning, but it is not fully explored in the poem. Consider expanding on this idea to give the poem more depth and resonance.

Lastly, the poem ends abruptly with "Mash the gas to beat the crowd". This line feels disconnected from the rest of the poem, both in terms of its content and its tone. Consider revising this line to provide a more satisfying conclusion to the poem.

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With these two lines:

Repeat those old mistakes
Mash the gas to beat the crowd

does that mean hitting the gas pedal real hard to get out of traffic? That is what I thought, but I could be wrong of course!

*Biggest Hugs, Cat

Those lines caught my attention, as well:

Repeat those old mistakes
Mash the gas to beat the crowd

My interpretation of them, however, was a bit different. Having commuted to the Cities forever, I always noticed that, with the first snowstorm, everyone seemed to have forgotten how to drive in snow. For some, if there were a week between storms, the skills had already vanished.

In any case, it is obvious that you've been battling snow and all that comes with it for a long time. Good job.