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Senyru Life
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me. (Ian)
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Sparrow
Thu, 2017-08-31 19:39
Dear Barbara
Just an additive to your Senyru, hope this keeps the flow into places only dreamed of, yours as always Ian..xx
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2017-09-01 01:47
Thanks beautiful addition
Just what I would add to make it a Tanka
Unconditional love to you.
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
Im loving this
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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Dooreen Cash
Fri, 2017-09-01 01:40
To You Barbara
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free
D.Cash
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2017-09-01 01:49
Thanks Dooreen
You got the navigating down here
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
Neopoet Community
Sparrow
Fri, 2017-09-01 03:57
Barbara
Maybe an addition am not sure..
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me.
Yours as always Ian..xx
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
Barbara Writes
Sat, 2017-09-02 10:41
Nice
You got the navigating down here
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me. (Ian)
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
Neopoet Community