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The Ride
I hear the sound of your distant tears falling
I can feel your broken heart as it is calling
I jump onto my trusty horse, and I ride
I long to be back again by your loving side
I want to feel once again your soft lips
Feel my arms around your curving hips
Rain nor beast can slow my horse down
As I ride through dark forests and towns
When I reach you, we will never part again
As we love our love that has no end
Last few words:
A little fantasy poem I wrote
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-12-08 05:19
dear Depressed1
your poem is lovely.
*hugs, Cat
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Depressed 1
Thu, 2022-12-08 06:18
Thank
Thank you Cat.
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Geezer
Thu, 2022-12-08 13:40
It sounds...
as though a princess is calling you! I'm sure that you would be her knight in shining armor! ~ Geez.
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Depressed 1
Fri, 2022-12-09 01:35
Thanks
Thanks Geezer. Like most of my life it is pure, or is it un-pure? fantasy.
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Alex Tanner
Thu, 2022-12-08 14:25
The Ride
Love this. It's my type of Poem. Flows easy from the heart.
Depressed 1
Fri, 2022-12-09 01:36
Thanks Alex
Thanks Alex I am glad you liked it.
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Lavender
Thu, 2022-12-08 18:03
The Ride
A bit of romance and poetic magic!
L
Depressed 1
Fri, 2022-12-09 01:37
Thanks
Thanks Lavender.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2022-12-09 10:29
Good job
I like all your stuff. This on especially speaks to me. My wife and I are pretty hopelessly co dependent on each other. Sometimes just going to work and and being apart for the day seems like forever. I also never want to leave, and when I do I feel like I’m battling my way back to some safe place against the nape of her neck under the aroma of her hair. I feel this. Deeply.
Tim
Depressed 1
Mon, 2022-12-12 02:18
Thanks
Thanks Tim I am glad you could relate to it.
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