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PLEASANT PLACES

Bubbling births, beaming beauties,
Lovely lads, lively,lustre
A fortress overt in splendor, nature's bloom,
Overflowing, sharing its goodness to many places,
"Let there be light" and everything was good,
Life transcends into rest when there's peace,
Favour runs far when lines are in pleasant places.

Pleasant places, piquant phantasy,
Blissful ,blossoming, blessed brethrens
The lines have fallen in pleasant places,
You're welcome to wander in the realm of goodly heritage,
Feasting in the warmth of wonder,
Nag not, everything good will come,
For lines are running through pleasant places,

Pleasant places, perfect pleasure,
Utopia, unmatched, unyielding
Your heart? Stick on the walls of courage, knowing no trouble,
Flimsy foes lying in obeisance to your power ,
For this is where all good gather,
Pleasant,knowing no shame .

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