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My Father's love

Submitted by Sheddie on Tue, 2023-06-27 12:49

In a world of dreams, a father's love gleams,
Guiding you with care, like sun's golden beams.
He's your hero strong, with arms open wide,
In his love's embrace, you forever reside.

In a world full of wonder, so bright and so grand,
There's a love that's as strong as a guiding hand.
It's the love of a father, so steady and true,
Always there to support and to help see you through.

A father's love never flee nor fear,
It's always there to keep you warm dear,
In times of weary and sick, love's just near.
Forever in peace, no despair.
Your father's love will still be enjoying your affair

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Tue, 2023-06-27 18:50

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem "My Father's Love". It is a beautiful tribute to the love and support of a father. Your use of imagery, such as "sun's golden beams" and "guiding hand", effectively conveys the warmth and guidance that a father's love can provide.

One suggestion for improvement would be to consider varying the structure of your poem. Currently, each stanza follows a similar pattern of rhyming couplets. While this can create a sense of cohesion, it may also make the poem feel repetitive. Experimenting with different rhyme schemes or stanza structures could add more depth and interest to your poem.

Another suggestion would be to consider adding more specific details or anecdotes to further illustrate the impact of your father's love. This could help to make the poem more personal and relatable to readers who may have had similar experiences with their own fathers.

Overall, your poem effectively captures the warmth and comfort of a father's love. With some additional attention to structure and detail

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