Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

My 4th of July 2020

Strapped to a chair,
Trapped by my own mind,
Looking at the open entryway
With demons dancing in my head
Feeding my mind with bitter thoughts.
The outside comes to my window,
All is vivid and near but can't be touched
It's so lonely, so dreadful,so frightful
In my room, my isolation.

Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

you are describing someone in a nursing home or somebody with a compromised immune system.
My mother is in a nursing home and she isn't allowed visitors, so my sisters go around to her window and stand outside and wave to her and talk to her through the screen. They bring the grandkids and everybody wears masks. But, she is longing for closer contact and the ability to go out in the courtyard to get some sun. It is really hard on her. So, I know what you are talking about. You have captured the anxiety and dreadful depression of this whole thing. Nice job, no crits. ~ Geezer.
.

Our Chatroom is open 24/7 Feel free to use it for
keeping in touch We have poets around the world and it is fun
to have real-time conversations with those that are up
all night or on the other side of the world.
.

I agree with Geezer,or it ay be self isolation from the world around you either way nice work

Our chat room is not only there for Thursday afternoon chat 3:30-4:30
but it is there and ready for all to use at anytime of day come often and hook up in conversation to those across the globe

(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.