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Love

I love you like a butterfly;
my stomach flutters,
only for you.

I love you like a diamond,
sparkling and glittering,
when I look into your eyes.

I love you like raindrops,
that embraces the leaves with tears,
when we're apart.

I love you like a lighthouse,
with its guiding light,
always there, forever beckoning.

I love you like a mystery,
which I can sense,
but not explain.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

A "list poem" , a very effective form. Some very nice fresh images, such as
I love you like raindrops,
that embraces the leaves with tears,
when we're apart.

You have a nice touch. Take yourself seriously. "Aliens" as favorite poets...

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

the list too! I particularly like the "I love you like a butterfly;
my stomach flutters for only you". I have had those feelings myself and can relate to them.
Nice work, ~ Geezer.
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