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Moonlit Love

Hiding in the shadows
creeping through the dark,
meeting in the moonlight
far away from human's mark.

The world further opposed
heartless towards our love.
The forest, a silent promise,
a closet, for emotions inside.

The wind mirrors each kiss.
As each chill embraces our skin,
the fever ignites within.

Moonlit glances of love,
lips soft to each touch.
Night guides love-ridden hands
she understands.

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Come on there must be some quiet Motel rooms lol..
Good write just a little soft as the Moonlight.
This needs more body, if you are going to be with someone in secret or wherever then draw me a picture of essence feelings and happiness.
Let the moon shine through yonder window with a glow.
Keep writing, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Haha quiet motel rooms just don't seem as romantic :)
Definitely can see where it needs a stronger body. I'll work on that.

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