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Missing you.
Thinking of you
keeps the skies blue.
Theres nothing I love more, than those two.
Skies, and you, a wonderful two.
Bringing me cheer on a thunderous day,
Keeping the bed bugs and monsters away.
With every worry and every fear,
happy thoughts, kept close, are dear.
For I know even when you're not here,
I can look to my heart and know you're there.
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2011-06-29 01:13
ANC
i enjoyed this wonderful poem.
the cliche's "bed bugs and monsters." flow beautifully with this beautifully rhymed poetry.
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ANC1996
Thu, 2011-06-30 22:44
:)
Thanks!
author commentraj
Fri, 2011-07-01 14:53
ANC
This is literally SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!! words emoting from a lovely heart for sure for a loved one....very honest and true to the words...
raj (sublime_ocean)