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Let

Let our lips meet some day, like these ..oh how sweet thy lips upon mine ...oh what a treat ...
then two angels from the outside world shall retreat ...
to in the far folds of eternity to meet ...
and
then devour each other..
hour by hour ...
till in our bones remains no more power...
and then the two entwined ,are taken away by divine... to a lovers paradise ... if there be one..
and the world of lovers ...shall in our glamour... compose romantic poetry...
like

Romeo and Juliet ..

the two of us shall be....

Brown hair blue eyes

She has brown hair
that makes me stare
her eyes are like blue
like I see the lotus hue...

she looks so fair
and
does at me glare
then as she stares
she ruffles my hair

I have very little in any case
I will not mind
if she pulls the rest

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love it loved
and love the finish
made me smile

love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

I composed that over two years ago
glad you smirked

loved

author comment

You are a wonderful storyteller with the written word! Loved this!

and the last lines gave me a chuckle:

I have very little in any case
I will not mind
if she pulls the rest

always, Cat

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Thanks,Cat

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