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where eternity and infinity meet

Many serious thoughts …cross one’s mind
when the need draws
some say it's normal,
just wait… others shed tears
what will happen
when I'm no more!
who shall whack my back
as I whine
who will say a bloody good man divine
and who will laugh and shout aloud,
gone is the self wallowing clown
then there aren't many dirty fish
In the ocean of life,
many suffer beyond variable strife
yet survive … some die
ere and ere…
but no one about them does care
ere they die somewhere
out where eternity meets infinity
Loved will be calling out at you
Lovedly
and so be it
a rebirth from toxic times,
when all called to say
the guy doesn't rhyme,
anyway thank goodness, he has merged,
but someone will yell,
friend , but not submerged …

till then let the twain be fixed
Eternity with infinity
between me
as I embark on a voyage beyond time
where there is no need
to be sad,
if poetry does
or does not rhyme….
Composing epicurial poetry too
is no crime…

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A good write maybe you should shout some more, reminds me of the one I wrote called "Beginning"
A BEGINNING

There in infinity dwelt a silence of a void
The void with its glow, pulsed Alpha and Omega
Here is where man in his limited ways cannot be
For infinity has no place for time or things like man

The glow pulsed for an instant, was this infinity
Born of the voids of timeless distance and space
Infinity stirred pushing, pulsing, spreading outward
Once again pushing itself into the birth of being

Filling the eternal void as it exploded outward
The further it pushed into being, there was the light
Spurred on by its release into the short eternity
So once again Alpha reached out its hand for Omega
We will meet in that quiet one day betwixt Alpha and Omega,
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

P O E TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

loved

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as LOVED

AU REVOIR
till we meet again
some where in the rounded off corners of time
god willing....
if there be one
sun we all know is the creator
AMEN

loved

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It is ineffably sad, poignant, yet lovely.
"then there aren't many dirty fish
In the ocean of life,"
So true

We have had our strife, I have found your gems and we share one thing, our nature is irrepressible. Nothing can stop us. I sincerely hope there is not a goodbye implied in this poem.

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cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

You have been instrumental in my success
but sad the last one you found as the best
discard the rest
as I also rest

as loved tis a right au revoir guess

Great was it to have worked under you
under no stress
what is or would be loved without you

But the binding is so
that I have to go
as Loved this is the last
au revoir

I bow to you

loved

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There can't be a viable reason for leaving Neopoet, so what's the problem, even if you write a few times a year or comment less.
We have had a great walk through the last few years of writing and even though you doubt too much, you can write great poetry.
I call you young Bard for a reason and you have shown that reason at the most unexpected times and in the odd stanza.
Now can we get rid of this I am going, and just maybe rest awhile, or best of all stay as Loved.. Beloved as Loved IS,
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

but owing to some technical reasons i will use another laps top and as loved has already been taken.....
I shall appear as lovedly...//////???????>>>>> HOPE FULLY
IAN I can't and shan't leave theeeeeeeeeeeeee
confirm from sadie
. Stan has held my hand great man....

the truth must not be sacrificed
I stand by
as Stan will hold my hand
and you will stand ....
by as before

bard will be the same one for sure ....
no less no more

you will hence forth say you loved Loved
and now a new born star
LO V E D L Y

A NEW TWIN shines in the sky
as a new star
and from a distance perhaps
be a newer Sun!
hahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

until then
let my mind rest in peace
ere it pieces
the bard!

welcome me

loved

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