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fear not the coming ;;;of death!

Death is like a dentist’s injection
the fear of long needle
brought from behind the dentists back
a jab
a slight Ouchy pain
then all ends

so does this happen with life,
I have physically experienced
5 minutes of death
from being….
to nothingness
and
Sorry no heaven
NO HELL
no death
neither angels nor God
nor any wifey or friendy
just none at all
a dead rat- like
that ,that's all

so be not afraid of what has to be
read above my deadly
death like poetry
will yee
and
when you fade away
do so with glee
you will continue to live in the hearts
of guys like me
So be it!

THIS IS MY LAST CONTRIBUTION AS LOVED
Thanks for all your love and readings
also encouragement to learn and compose .

Aurevoir
Six decades have flown down
all the Rivers
you can name
Loved for ever does remain
A N O N..
thank you and temporarily bye
GOD if there is one
may Bless you

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What do you mean by 'THIS IS MY LAST CONTRIBUTION AS LOVED"?
Are you changing our name or something?

Alid

buying a new compy and renewed friendship
next stop MARS
ask Stan

loved

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See you on the next compy, lol you dare move away I shall send Sadie to look for you not that she has to go anywhere just a think job.
Take care will reread this later, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I have informed Stan
to permit me a new id
THIS ID WILL NOT BE USED
as I will be losing this LAPS compy
please follow up quickly
as after 25th Jun we will not be able to communicate
unless Stan acts fast

NICE KNOWING YOU Ian

loved

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