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I Don't Think I Know

I think I know.

You don’t think I know.

I don’t think you know.

But you think you know.

You think, I know

but you know I think.

so you think, I don’t know,

I don’t think I know.

You think I know

I know I don’t think,

but I know you think,

so I think, I don’t know.

You don’t always think,

I think, that I know.

I don’t always think,

you know that, I think.

I think I know

you don’t think I know.

But I think you know

I don’t think - I know.

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One thing I know is, I think you know what I don't think I know about the things I should know to get out of this maze of knowing and unknowing. What I know is you got my head in spin mode for sure :)

Fun apart, you have hit upon the "unknown" cleverly and used it cleverly too in the title...

So, you know what i mean? :)

thank you for making me smile a lot about how little I know.....raj

raj (sublime_ocean)

Hilarious! I've got tears running down my cheek. Ha ha

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Hilarious! I've got tears running down my cheeks. Whaa ha ha

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I am glad to hear those hilarious sounds...keep that sweet music on...you know what i mean? now don't back to the title of your poem and rhyme "I don't think i know"...lol...raj

raj (sublime_ocean)

Came back to tell you that this can be a very good tongue twister..i tried to read it in one breath...but resigned with the title of your poem convinced that "I don't thin I know" how to do it...:)

raj

raj (sublime_ocean)

Ahh but it could be "I don't think - I know" lol .

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that others only think of me
but i think others know little
to be thinking about me
but i think you know
what i think about you
but ur thinking
is not my thinking
you think
i am thinking of confusing you
more than that i think
that ur thinking that I do
confuse thinking
wow what are u thinking
I think
I now know too

as raj also thinks
about your thinking too
he thinks
I too think
like he thinks too

loved

I think I'm going insane! Ha ha

Love Mand

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Your poem is way better than mine - at least yours makes sense!

Thanks for coming by loved - your a nice un.

Love Mand xxxx

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am I being baffled

loved

You did my head in with this one I had to read it twice and I am left not knowing ;)

god woman what are you trying to do to me, I don't know anything right now ha ha !

Where did this come from ? I really want to know or I don't know LOL

much love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Sorry JC! he he I don't know. Lol

I think even Wesley would have problems punctuating this one. Lol

So brain surgery here I come!

Ha ha

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LOL !! Book me in next, this really tests the power of comprehension its a mind twister

love and hugs JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

LOL. You make me cross-eyed, wondering what your message is before i finally understand its about the unknown part of the mind... the assumptions, the ignorance and somewhere in between.at least, that's what i think.. I agree with JC. you are a mind twister here. :) this poem is simple but hard at the same time?!

Alid
Can't believe i have to read five times before i get it!

This is nonsense:-

Know that I know
Now I know, you know
Oh! to know that you know
We both now know. or know now, you know.

Look what you have done it is stuck there inside knowing this and knowing that, I give ups you know.
Have a great day and find another word QI is moving on from "K" so we must, Yours Ian.T. you know????????????????????????

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ha ha - I know.- or at least I think I know. Lol

Qi is moving on from "K" ?? What?? ha ha I'm being dense again - what does that mean??

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A TV quiz programme run by Steven Fry
a great laugh, have a look if your feeling down lol,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I will - He's been doing a programme called the "secret life of animals", I think. It's really good.

Thanks again

Love Mand xxxx

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