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how happy can Loved be ?can you imagine

how happy can Loved be can you imagine
for siding me
the world of poets have taken my advice,
more compose freer verse
and avoid being routine-sh terse
many no longer adopt
ab ab ac ac
and what have you,
if Loved didn't exist
nor would have Shakespeare too

So be yourself and express
what you need to say
poetry is just an emotion
a flow of feelings
a desire only to ease tension
as more share with you gradually
so thank

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Free verse is my first choice to express myself (eddy styx, too!) And I want to say that it would be a mighty sad place without Loved in the multiverse! I'm very glad you exist!

always, Cat (& eddy)

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

that's why I accept you
as my poetess first

as you praise the strugglers of this universe
harness their energy
to converse
in free verse...


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