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Submitted by Simon on Tue, 2019-12-17 06:48

All kingdoms
Needs their freedom
And to be ruled by the people of wisdom.

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Last few words: 
Sweet and good government is all we need.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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c lynn brooks

Wed, 2019-12-25 15:01

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need singular
please expand on this you have a good start

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