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Gone With The Tip of A Knife

After being in pain for too long
I can now sing a song
gone with the tip of a knife
I will regain a life
this broken tooth will be gone.

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I am happy you're feeling better.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thanks for the encouragement but I'm not feeling better but have the hope of feeling better bc soon hopefully the two, one broken and other bad root canal, will be removed. Lol. I see Jess's limerick WS paid off hehe.

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Great content
Not great limerick form.
Read some more classic limericks and let the form sing in your mind.

cheers,
Jess
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I shall do

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