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Gold Digger

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold in her mouth didn't
get there miraculous.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the abundance of gold jewelry
in her boudoir didn't get their by chance.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold Mercedes she drive
didn't come from the land of oz.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold trimming on her white house
and picket fence didn't fall from heaven
like manna.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but all that gold didn't fall
for her great smile or did it?

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a gold digger. People just like to give her gold! It makes them feel good. LOL Nice ! ~ Gee

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I like your response. You completed the rhythm nicely

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