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Gold Digger

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold in her mouth didn't
get there miraculous.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the abundance of gold jewelry
in her boudoir didn't get their by chance.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold Mercedes she drive
didn't come from the land of oz.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but the gold trimming on her white house
and picket fence didn't fall from heaven
like manna.

I'm not saying she's a gold digger,
but all that gold didn't fall
for her great smile or did it?

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a gold digger. People just like to give her gold! It makes them feel good. LOL Nice ! ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

I like your response. You completed the rhythm nicely

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