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Gaurdian Of The Night

Watching fiercely, and glowing bright,
Mother moon, gaurdian of night.
Goddess of twilight,she protects so well,
There to defend, where dark things dwell.

She catches nightmares,with the power of love
Sweeps them away on the wings of a dove,
Do not fear night, for she is the queen,
Glowing in the sky, proud to be seen.

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Free verse
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Welcome back ! Good to see you arrive with this wonderful concise poem.......scribbler

I have missed you all so much! Good to see you.

Much Love,
Elizabeth

author comment

Here in the UK we spell 'Guardian' like that!

You have captured a great topic here, I personally see the night as evil but you have turned that idea upside down and brought a super poem.

Welcome back my dear friend.

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

It is good to see you back. Welcome.
The rhyme here is wonderful. I love the subject, and the cadence is awesome, a thing I find so difficult to do well, with rhyme.
The only criticism I have...is that you were not invited back sooner.

Respectfully, Jim

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as i sang the peoemic song,
my eyes went with the waves along
and at every corner of my eye
i saw geen eyes
so shy.
wow just poetry tis
at times i wonder
how i miss
and
how still so many
read me after reading yours
i just can't imagine it.
whose on all fours
on the dancing floors.

loved

Poetic Song!

As I sang the peoemic song,
Ah! My eyes went
With the waves along
And
At every corner of my eye
I saw Green eyes
So naively shy

Wow just poetry tis
At times I wonder
How I miss
And
How still so many
Read mine
After reading yours
I just can't imagine
Who’s on all fours?
On the wooden
Dancing floors?

loved

Its so good to hear from everyone. Dan I would love to say that spelling was on purpose because I love all things UK, but it wasn't! LOL

Much Love,
Elizabeth

author comment

Elizabeth,

I have promised to buy Ziggy & Lou a dictionary as they are atrocious (I hope I spelt that right!) at spelling...looks like you need one too!!

Lol!

take care,

love,

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

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