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Fire in my bones

Words appear as
fire in my bones
memories like fuel on red ashes

Writing things down
cools the flames burning
At the end of the day
I am who I am

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This is so simple but so expressive as I see it. I really like it. Only the word "hot" doesn't look right to describe the flames...Maybe another adjective or even nothing is needed there.
just thoughts. I really enjoyed . Hope all is well.

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I guess flames explains itself as being hot since its aflame. Lol

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I must say I really enjoy reading this piece. Thanks for sharing!

Alid

thanks you are welcome

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A great theme expressed in a few words, lovely,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

appreciate the kind critique

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the words were too few for me, but fine initiative please add more conception to the poem for its longevity and uniqueness

thanks

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