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Drifting Thoughts From Far Away

"Where To Go?"
When a drop of water falls
The sound echoes in darkness
In this world that has no walls
Where to go to relieve one's sadness?

"The streak of tears
on my painted cheeks
cannot be denied
under the sun's light"

"Castle Far Away"
In a castle far, far away
Two shadows dance In a palely lit hall
They twirl in circles
Never letting go of each other's hands...

"Moon Waltz"
in this quiet night,
I think of someone...
of a palace...
of a hall illuminated by the silvery moonlight...
of two silhouettes dancing...
the sound of the wind chime that resonates from afar
is their only melody... a waltz under the moon...

"To You Who Is Leaving"
Start anew in a stranger's land
Stand on the ground
Ready to set off
Spread your wings
And I'll hold your hands

"The End of Dreams"
Heart is beating cold
And blood is running deep.
But the vessel is old
Wishing for a serene sleep However...
The sun is rising
Darkness is coming to an end
Awake from dreaming
Awake from worlds you transcend!

"I Saw Eternity"
I saw eternity
While I was half-asleep
The finite world disappeared from my sight
And above me
Was the infinite masterpiece
I could almost touch...

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This would make two lovely poems, as they are is OK but I felt that they were pulling things apart, I shall await to see what others say on this one, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Haven't checked my other poems these days. Actually, they were short poems I wrote on Facebook and each has its own concept. Since they are short, I decided not to post them separately; mainly because I'm too lazy :p
Anyway, thank you for your tips. I'll remember your points ^_^

"Time is a sly one,
In a blink of an eye,
It is gone."

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